General Fiction posted December 1, 2021


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A disappointing Christmas

Betsy Wetsy

by egomega

I asked Santa for Lincoln Logs, but instead, he brought me a Betsy Wetsy doll. She came with a baby bottle that when filled with water and inserted in her mouth, resulted in water coming out the other end and wetting her diaper. As I watched the boys in the family happily building Lincoln Log forts, I sat staring in dismay at a doll that did nothing but pee. I never trusted Santa after that.



Disappointing Christmas Present writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a non-fiction story about the most disappointing present you ever received for Christmas as a kid. Exactly 75 words.
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