General Poetry posted January 16, 2022


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
A rondeau.

A fortress

by royowen

I build a fortress for my mind,
lest foes will breach, a weakness find.
They do not know my secret place,
where wisdom builds on freedom's face,
where faith can see, but hearts are blind.

My old, dark ways, I've left behind,
I've turned away from chains that bind,
because they weave and mask God's grace.
I build a fortress...

As one should never be defined,
to be disabled and confined,
But all wise options should embrace,
to live by faith, in wisdom's face,
and with trust's presence be aligned.
I build a fortress...
R.Owen 10/01/2022



Recognized

#33
January
2022


A rondeau

A rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of 3 stanzas
a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet, with a rhyme scheme as
follows : aabba aabR aabbaR lines 9 and 15 are short, a refrain (R) consisting of a phrase from line 1, The other lines are longer, but all the same metrical length

Hebrews 10:38-39 Now the just shall live by faith: but if any draw back, my soul will have no pleasure in him. But we are not of them that draw back into perdition; but of them that believe in the saving of the soul.

Thanks for reading. R.Owen
artwork by google


Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. royowen All rights reserved. Registered copyright with FanStory.
royowen has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.