General Poetry posted February 24, 2022 Chapters:  ...161 162 -163- 164... 


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5/7/5 Poem

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Rain Kisses

by Gypsy Blue Rose


rain kisses drip down
cheerful cherub's chubby cheeks —
heaven’s lullaby 

 



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5/7/5 poem written in 3 lines with a 5/7/5 syllables pattern. The lines are connected grammatically and it doesn't rhyme. It's similar to haiku but has fewer rules.

Painting Helen Hyde, 1914

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