Self Improvement Poetry posted February 25, 2022


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I Have Life?

by kahpot

I have life, less memory's seeds
you must accept my past now bleeds
like mirrors blank when I approach
you're just a face who dares encroach

you come each day yet won't concede
I have life, less memory's seeds
your eyes of hope should look elsewhere
for of your life I've lost all care

my path now shown by dimming lights
I walk one line not left or right
I have life, less memory's seeds
while you just cry as time recedes

please live your life for it is rare
your children now deserve your care
I'm sure I'm happy, have no needs
I have life, less memory's seeds

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Thank you cleo85 for the wonderful artwork

Quatern
* four quatrains (4-line stanzas),
with 8 syllables in each line.
*The first line of stanza 1 is repeated as a refrain line as the second line of stanza 2,
*The third line of stanza 3 and the last line of stanza 4.
Thank you Jan for leading this wonderful club
Club entry for the "Quatern ~ week of 2-24-2022 ~" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
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Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

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