General Fiction posted April 7, 2022 |
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A very short story
Tragic
by Bridge
Mrs. Roy finally confessed today.
They had adopted Mita when she
was six months old. After Mrs.Roy
became pregnant she started to
resent Mita. The resentment quickly
turned to hatred. Soon she could not
bear to be around Mita but did not
let her feelings show. Finally on their
evening walk, yesterday, she
suddenly pushed Mita onto the road,
in front of oncoming cars. The eleven
year old girl did not stand a chance.
75 Word Flash writing prompt entry
Mrs. Roy finally confessed today.
They had adopted Mita when she
was six months old. After Mrs.Roy
became pregnant she started to
resent Mita. The resentment quickly
turned to hatred. Soon she could not
bear to be around Mita but did not
let her feelings show. Finally on their
evening walk, yesterday, she
suddenly pushed Mita onto the road,
in front of oncoming cars. The eleven
year old girl did not stand a chance.
They had adopted Mita when she
was six months old. After Mrs.Roy
became pregnant she started to
resent Mita. The resentment quickly
turned to hatred. Soon she could not
bear to be around Mita but did not
let her feelings show. Finally on their
evening walk, yesterday, she
suddenly pushed Mita onto the road,
in front of oncoming cars. The eleven
year old girl did not stand a chance.
Writing Prompt Can you tell a complete story with just 75 words? That is the challenge of this flash fiction contest. Title not included in word count. |
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