General Fiction posted April 7, 2022


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A very short story

Tragic

by Bridge

Mrs. Roy finally confessed today.

They had adopted Mita when she

was six months old. After Mrs.Roy

became pregnant she started to

resent Mita. The resentment quickly

turned to hatred. Soon she could not

bear to be around Mita but did not

let her feelings show. Finally on their

evening walk, yesterday, she

suddenly pushed Mita onto the road,

in front of oncoming cars. The eleven

year old girl did not stand a chance.



75 Word Flash writing prompt entry
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