General Flash Fiction posted June 6, 2022


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One small step for mankind...

Feeling Lucky

by Tom Horonzy


We walk hand in hand into a glade dappled in gold and tan by shafts of light provided by God himself.

Peace hangs reverently, as does a vignette of mist in the air.

Before dropping to my knees, I gaze longingly into the loveliest blue eyes, trying to decide, should I proceed or not, in asking you to be my bride.

Assured, I kneel, ring in hand, and pop the question. You respond, "I will."



75 Word Story writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a story on any topic. But you must use only 75 words to tell your story. Exactly 75 words. Title not included in the count.

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