General Poetry posted June 18, 2022


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Summer Fun

Holiday Inn

by Carlos' girl

We packed our bags
And took a spin
A few miles away
To The Holiday Inn

We had hotel fun
In the August heat
With the mini bar
High above the street

We took the elevator
To the 16th floor
Gave the maid a tip
And shut the door

A king sized bed
And big tall windows
We watched TV
Late Night and Jimmy Kimmel

In the room next door
The kids played all night
They ordered up sundaes
And had a pillow fight

Sometimes you don't need
To go very far
It's summer vacation
In the town where you are


























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