General Fiction posted June 26, 2022


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Puppy Misses Mom

by Raul1


Sarah gives love and attention to her dog Chip. He adores her too much. Chip wouldn't know what to do without her around for company. She runs to her car to do errands. Chip finds out that she is gone and totally left him. He thinks that she left him for good. Chip starts crying and scratches the door numerous times. He keeps barking and barking constantly. She never left him at all because his owner is busy buying groceries, and food for him.

Chip can't have it any other way. He badly needs her. Sarah is his bad medicine just like Bon Jovi's song titled. Pretty soon she will be coming back, but when will that time be. Chip keeps crying and repeats everything. This pup is a complete mess. Sarah comes back inside her home with full of groceries. She places them on the kitchen table. Chip licks her legs and jumps out to her. She is totally her bad medicine all right. 

He is finally happy. Chip thought before that she deserted him. He jumped to too many conclusions. He keeps waiting for her response. She puts all the food, things, and dog food in the closet. The food and drinks for her she put them in the refrigerator. You can tell that Chip is super hyper to see her. Sarah picks him up and kissed his cheek. This is what he wanted love for he is a silly pup.

You have to understand that they have to do improtant errands, work at home, and buy you much food. This is a lesson all dogs have to learn all times. And the moral of the story is for any dog to be patient for your best friend will come back because  s/he didn't disown you.



Write A Modern Fable writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a short fable-like story where the last sentence starts with: "And the moral of the story is". This can be on any subject, true or fictional, and can be in any voice, as long as the moral is stated in the last line. A new twist on an old fable is also allowed. Be creative and have fun! Maximum word count: 300


This advice is to the domestic animals. It is their moral to the story.
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