General Poetry posted June 27, 2022


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sedoka

Conversations Into Eternity...

by GregoryCody

Breathe once more my love ~
remember our yesterday
return from eternity


I can't gasp again
forever fills virgin lungs ~
you kept my heart within you



Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.


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Sedoka Guidelines:

* traditionally a love poem (and often a collaborative work)


2 Stanzas: 5-7-7 5-7-7

First stanza is a question by one lover.

Second stanza is an answer by the other.




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