Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 30, 2022


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a Tyburn poem

crazy thoughts

by jake cosmos aller

couple of observations though.

The last two lines both have ten syllables, they should only have nine. And the last sentence, (a) doesn't match the tense of (knots). Reviewed with blinders on.

crazy
lazy
hazy
glazy
filled wild heart, crazy, lazy thought,
memory still hazy, glazy knot.



Tyburn poetry contest writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme or near rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

For example:
Myself by Marion Gibson

Sowing
Hoeing
Growing
Mowing

Planting gardens, sowing, hoeing grounds.
Sunshine keeps all growing, mowing mounds.

Example 2:
Rhymetender by Yancy Lee Dalton

Minor
Kinder
Finer
Rhymer

Caretaker of minor, kinder rhymes.
Tender heart of finer, rhymer times



Write a six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme or near rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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