Romance Poetry posted December 22, 2022 Chapters:  ...82 83 -84- 85... 


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5 6 4 6 3 Tanka

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Mournful Loon's Winter Wail

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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I'll miss you the most
when gray dusk mist settles
upon the reeds
where the   
loons' winter wail
spears my heart
 


 




Tanka is one of the oldest types of Japanese poetry. It begun in the Emperial Court, where lovers exchanged a tanka after a night of lovemaking.

Tanka in Japan, is 31 syllables in a 5/7/5/7/7 form, but in English is 31 syllables OR LESS format.

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