Young Adult Fiction posted January 2, 2023


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Charlie Disappeared

by Raul1


The last time I saw Charlie was at an Advanced Autoparts store. He was trying to get a tool to fix his tires. I had been waiting to hear from him since. No one knew where he disappeared.
 
Many of my friends told me that he had been hunting ghosts. I thought that they were nuts. But it was an interesting assumption. However, I hope that he returns because it had been a long time since I last saw him. The next day as I was drinking coffee and reading the newspaper, I heard a loud knocking on my door. To my surprise, Charlie was standing there with a big smile on his face. I immediately let him in. As we sat and visited, he told me about where he had been.
 
"After I got my tires fixed, I went on several ghost hunting trips. You would be surprised to have seen what I saw," Charlie responded.
 
I was mesmerized by Charlie's tales of discovery of ghosts. While most people don't believe in them, he was very convincing. Never will I doubt his story until I can prove him wrong.



Charlie writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a story that begins with the line: The last time I saw Charlie ... (continue the sentence and story).
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