General Poetry posted January 8, 2023


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Englyn Penfyr

A World Changed

by Susanjohn

 
 
If I could change the world today, I would …
cease childhood pain and defray
where innocent become prey.
 
Rebuild generations of shattered lives, 
when edged knives pierce souls battered,
and most human love, scattered.
 
N'er loneliness ensnare a child as friend;
nor, wend a spirit exiled …
weeping, heartlessly defiled.
 
I'd banish all evil - true twisted minds,
mankind's shamelessly askew ...
through blazing fires, forged brand-new.
 
May every child warmed by a womb within
begin … eyes cast t'ward the sky,
knowing pure love ~ lifted high.
 



Rhyming Poetry Contest contest entry


Englyn Penfyr
(in-glin pin-fir)

The Englyn Penfyr is one of 24 traditional Welsh stanzaic forms,
dating as far back as the early 8th century, it was recited before royalty.
Composed of 3 lines; L1 is 10 syllables, while L2 and L3 are 7 syllables each;
The first occurrence of the dominant rhyme in L1 is followed by a syllable and
a rhyme, which is repeated within the first two or three syllables of line 2.
Three verses is considered a poem, but there is no verse limit.

The rhyme scheme per verse, therefore, is A-b, b-A, A as follows:
xxxxxxxA-xb
xbxxxxA
xxxxxxA

xxxxxxxC-xd
xdxxxxC
xxxxxxC

xxxxxxxE-xf
xfxxxxE
xxxxxxE

Etc....
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