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2/4/6/8/2 Cinquain for the Contest

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Empty Boat Full of Dusk

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

Empty Boat Full of Dusk

gentle
wake waves embrace
the busy docking bay,
     without the fish in nets to sell —

washout

 



Cinquain Poetry contest entry


CINQUAIN is inspired by Japanese haiku and tanka, and is akin in spirit to that of the *Imagists. The form is five lines with 22 syllables count in a pattern of 2/4/6/8/2. The title is used as the sixth line. It's usually unrhymed but it can be rhymed about any subject. American poet, Adelaide Crapsey 1915, created it. Her cinquain depends on the strict structure and intense imagery to communicate a mood or feeling.

*Imagism was a movement in early-20th-century American poetry that favored precision of imagery and clear, sharp language, very much like haiku and tanka. more information
more information about cinquain

top picture from google public domain; bottom picture by Akos Batorfi on flickr

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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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