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Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Nonsensical Musings

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
Let me dip my feet

to check how cold are your waves,

and should I dive-in

 onto your darkest deep end?

Will you drown my heart

with passionate algae tides

midst exotic fish

and turbulent current hugs?

When I wake, will you be there?
 
 
 
 




CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, Choka was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

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"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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