General Poetry posted August 31, 2023


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Always together ...

Dancing with the stars ...

by Wendy G

 
loud, proud, thunder claps ...
 
applauds lightning's flash dance moves - 
 
sound and light display
 
 
 



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized


I have used "claps" as a verb, for personification of thunder as a partner and spectator of lightning's dancing.
Thunder claps his hands, and thunder applauds the dancing.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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