General Poetry posted October 6, 2023


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At end of life, this is what a carer does

Carer's role

by Wendy G

5-7-5 Contest Winner 

 

watch, weep, and wait, while

time hovers, suspended, still –

tiring, tense vigil



Writing Prompt
Write a poem with 5-7-5 syllable count. First line has five syllables. Second line has 7. Third line has 5 again.

5-7-5
Contest Winner


It's a difficult and draining experience to watch a loved one suffer in hospital. The main thing is that they know we love and care.
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