General Poetry posted January 3, 2024


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A bustling market is just solitary confinement en masse

City Crowd

by Navada

 

In the bustle of the city crowd

you have no friend.

 

The paths of selfish customers entwine and merge and blend

as they shop with concentration and they chase the dividend.

They focus on their bargains and the messages they send

 

are to stand aside or suffer

in the callous city crowd.

 

The endless stream of faces, often vacant, never proud;

the bark of vendors’ voices, always strident, hoarse and loud.

The casual observer shook his head and sadly vowed

 

that there’s no such thing as kindness

in the market, in the city.

 

The ever-hopeful busker plays another tuneless ditty.

One watches him – not out of admiration, but of pity.

A spieler round the corner tries his hardest to be witty

 

in the crushing isolation

of the lonely, busy, focused, dizzy,

city crowd.




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"Spielers" are glib and shady orators who draw in passersby to get them to spend their money. In other parts of the world, they're known as "barkers".
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