Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 15, 2024


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The ephemeral nature of society

Machu Pichu

by estory

Another continent.
Another ruin.

Another lost civilization
Scattered across the mountain tops.

The footsteps of ceremonies
And forgotten rituals

Vanished into thin air.
What happened here?

Who were these people
Hoping to climb the stairway to heaven

And the sun god, the great one
Who seemed to bring them light

And the life giving rains,
Watching over their crops.

What became of them all?
Did these gods abandon them

Like the sun setting behind the peaks,
Never to rise again?




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Scattered throughout this collection Ruins will be these poems about actual ruins of civilizations. The mysteriously abandoned Machu Pichu seems to symbolize for me the ephemeral nature of societies, of cultures. And its abandonment begs the question of the fickle nature of fate itself. Maybe of God. Why do some rise and some fall? I wanted that last image of the sun set behind the mountains to be this haunting moment of abandonment. Maybe so it forces us to ask the question of what is going to happen to US. estory
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