General Poetry posted February 10, 2024


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I think itâ??s time to move on 3 years is a long time

Last stop

by Zaria Anderson

As I was drowning my feelings the train was making its last stop 

I already packed up my thoughts and grabbed my coat 

I hopped on board the smoke blurring you out 

The train is no longer cherry red 

just a deep blue 

my tear soaked bathroom in the middle of a field, fades away 

In this field, the sun never wakes or lays to rest 

Everything becomes hazy 

You’re on the sink 

Just a wet paper ball of feelings 


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I had written a lot about her, even a five page letter. I decided to be dramatic and soak the letters in the sink. As I was doing that, a train was passing by. Hopefully thatâ??s a good sign.
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