Meet Yellow Puppy! This is not her original color or design. (She used to look like a Cocker Spaniel puppy; however, as you can see, she's well-loved.) A family friend offered to give her a new coat when I was young, and while I hesitated to give Yellow Puppy up, I agreed. This friend worked hard and returned her two days later. My new Yellow Puppy shocked me, and Mom worried I wouldn't love her as much, yet she shouldn't have. It was still my Yellow Puppy!

I've wanted to write an acrostic poem about her for a while, and while I love the result, I'm unsure about the first stanza. Do you have any suggestions for how I could improve and strengthen it?

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