General Poetry posted March 26, 2024


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Watching it rain

Drip Drop

by GWHARGIS

When a cloud starts to weep
We huddle up inside
Grownups don't see
the potential while we hide.

Give a kid some boots
Rubber ones are best
Then turn them loose outside
And put them to the test.

Every puddle is a sight
An ocean to their eyes
And jumping in the middle
Is its own first prize

So next time it starts raining
Become a kid again
Pull your boots on tight
And let the fun begin.

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It's been raining a lot. Grandkids we're here and during a short dry spell they ran out to play ... straight to a huge puddle.
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