General Poetry posted April 27, 2024


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5-7-5 poem

Navigation Sunset

by Mark Jackson

River mirrors sky

Sun's dip sets water aglow

Day's final heartbeats




5-7-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 on any topic. A 5-7-5 is a poem with the following syllable count: First line has five syllables. Second line has seven. Third line has five.


This is written about the photograph I took late in September. I was walking from my hometown to the coast following the Navigation which is the name for a river when upgraded to a canal. I made the mistake of camping out, it was too cold to sleep.
I have tried to play with the words by placing the adjectives dip and set between the nouns Sun and water.
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