Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 18, 2024 |
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Scenes from a Dance hall
Dance Hall Girl
by Pamusart
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I guess the moral is to live a Godly life. This never would have happened but for the alcohol and debauchery
Of course his wife is a psycho. He did not deserve to die. However he put himself in a position that he could die.
I am not saying that every married man who goes out and has fun should be shot. What I am saying is that he put himself in the position to be shot. A lot of shootings happen at nightclubs and strip clubs and dance club is kind of like a strip club.
I know this is different than my usual fare. But, I do shock at the end like I have been doing lately
Credit google for the image
Thank you for reading my poem
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. Of course his wife is a psycho. He did not deserve to die. However he put himself in a position that he could die.
I am not saying that every married man who goes out and has fun should be shot. What I am saying is that he put himself in the position to be shot. A lot of shootings happen at nightclubs and strip clubs and dance club is kind of like a strip club.
I know this is different than my usual fare. But, I do shock at the end like I have been doing lately
Credit google for the image
Thank you for reading my poem
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