General Fiction posted June 19, 2024


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Youth, Imagination and Energy. A winning combination.

Magnificent

by Barry Penfold


The stick moved easily through the cleared soil pad. My mind had the picture and my body ached with the build. Three days and done. How good it looked.

The test would tell the real story. Helmet on, leg over, bum nicely settled on the seat. Off I go.
Down the hump and to the left. A straight stretch allows me to move fast to another corner. Wow.
How good is my bike track?

MAGNIFICENT.



75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry

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#33
June
2024


Your youth should be a time of exploration, imagination and building. A time of magnificence.
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