Romance Poetry posted July 22, 2024


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While the band was playing

by Willie P. Smith

 
While the band was playing,
Me and my gal were swaying.
 
You whispered in my ear,
Just loud enough for me to hear,
 
"I love you"
 
We held each other near,
Again You whispered in my ear.
 
"I love you"
 
As the band continued to play,
I once more heard you softly say,
 
"I love you"
 
By the time we stopped dancing
And while we were romancing,
 
"I love you
 
When the night came to an end,
I could no longer call you just a friend.
 
"I love you"
 
Willie P. 07/21/24




I got the message, she loves me.
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