General Fiction posted July 25, 2024


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An old dog tries to please her master.

A Good Girl

by A.Z. Schott

“Ginger? Here, girl!" I fly into his arms and kiss his face. 

"Oh, who's a good girl?" His fingers scratch behind my ear. Today’s going to be a great day!

He reaches for my leash, and we walk down the street. 

We get to a new building. So many dogs! So many smells! So exciting!

He hands my leash to a stranger. He looks at me again. He's not smiling. “I’m sorry.” 

He walks away.

What’s wrong? I try to follow him, but the stranger won't let me. Where is he going? Why? 

I thought--I was a good girl.




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