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Only Death Can Cure a Fool

by Videl Sky

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It was just past twilight; she was driving slowly home.
Saw a car with hazards on, shining a vivid chrome.
Thinking someone needed help, she braked to a halt,
The urge to help others was her basic default.
 
As she approached the window, the door swung open -
Her body went stock still, her smile now frozen.
The silver of the car seemed to flash in his hands;
Then he took what he wanted; he made no demands.
 
The dewy grass was cold against her tear-stained cheek,
It was all she could do to remain still and meek.
She thought she had a chance of getting out half-whole,
A mistake to think he had even that much soul.
 
The ground wept bloody tears as it watched her depart -
The revving of the engine hid her slowing heart.
Her body illuminated by a glaring light,
Eyes dimming as her body bade a soft goodnight.
 
Memories, a flash, a blur – but she couldn’t be saved -
This saying on her mind, virtually engraved.
Her father was right, albeit cruel,
                “Only death can cure a fool.”


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