Writing Poetry posted September 12, 2024


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Angela's Combat For Survival C

by Angela Unique Raine

In the blazing sunrise, where shadows shatter,  

A melody stirs, woven in chance—  

A father’s heart, fierce and bold,  

Cradles dreams in arms of gold.

 

From youthful days, when life was bright,  

He stepped, unknowing, into the night.  

A tempest roared, challenges unfurled,  

Yet love ignited, a fire in this world.

 

Each burden heavy, a mountain to climb,  

While laughter echoed in the sands of time.  

With shoulders strong as ancient trees,  

He weathered storms, quelled raging seas.

 

In twilight’s embrace, through trials he rose,  

An indomitable spirit, like a river that flows.  

With every setback, wisdom discerned,  

The flame of hope, in our hearts, burned.

 

Together we ventured, hand in hand,  

Across life’s vast, uncharted land.  

Through late-night whispers, secrets shared,  

A tapestry woven, love declared.

 

Our laughter soared like birds on the wing,  

In our sanctuary, where hearts could sing.  

Each milestone a brushstroke, vibrant and bright,  

Crafting a canvas that danced with light.

 

His youthful spirit, a gentle breeze,  

Soothing my soul like rustling leaves.  

In the garden of dreams, we planted our seeds,  

A bond that blossomed, fulfilling our needs.

 

As the world spun wild, we found our ground,  

In the chaos of life, our refuge found.  

A lighthouse flickering, guiding my way,  

Through darkest nights, into the day.

 

I stood in awe of the love we spun,  

A vibrant painting, two souls as one.  

Each brushstroke bursting, emotions collide,  

A kaleidoscope of life, in which we confide.

 

Miracles born from the tender embrace,  

Of father and child, in this sacred space.  

With gratitude swelling, my heart takes flight,  

For the journey we traveled, a beacon of light.

 

So here lies our story, vivid and true,  

A testament to love, ever anew.  

In the depths of our souls, in the heights we attain,  

We rise like the dawn, through joy and through pain.

 

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