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Short Story 100 wordsIt seemed like a good idea at the time.
A chapter in the book Tales of our Times

To Let

by zanya


It seemed like a good idea at the time.

Cath and John  had  been together for  a whole month. They  gazed lovingly into each other’s eyes and whispered sweet nothings.

 So when they found a tiny studio ten minutes from campus, they deposited their meagre belongings and set sail on a sea of love's bliss.

John loved having no brother to fight with about gaming all night. Cath could indulge her passion for fashion on Tk Tk with no annoying  interruptions from her kid sister.

Alas, love, untended, withered on the vine. The tiny studio soon had another ‘To Let’ sign.




A Good Idea writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Start your story with the sentence:
It seemed like a good idea at the time.
*100 words max
*fiction or nonfiction
*any genre
*no poetry


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