General Poetry posted October 13, 2024

jim vecchio

In my former life, I was a Program Coordinator in a Connecticut agency and worked with adults with developmental challenges, mental illness, and retardation. Outside of the Ministry, the greatest job of all! My soul mate, Rhonda, worked with a simil - more...

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but God offered redemption

Creation In Distress

by jim vecchio

Creation-in distress!
That woman caused a mess!
He did not give a hoot
Till Eve gave him the fruit

The Evil one did press
Creation in distress!
Eve listened to his word
A curse to us is hurled

There’s no turning back now
Adam’s now behind a plow
Creation in distress!
Eve clips lambs for her dress

We must work, then we die
Dare you now ask God why?
That woman caused a mess!
Creation in distress!

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Write a poem about a mess! As long as your poem is about making a mess, or encorporates the topic of messes, anything goes. Creative approaches are welcomed. Contest voters will be asked to consider the topic when making a choice for a winner. Now let's get sloppy!

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but God offered redemption

Creation In Distress

by jim vecchio

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