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50 Word Flash Fiction
Old Flame?
by zanya
Charlie grabbed his bag at the carousel.
Scrolling, he found Sonja’s picture. Chestnut eyes, now framed by greying brown locks.
‘Hola Thomas,’ she whispered hesitatingly.
‘Hola,’ he replied. Vague memories of learning Spanish together two decades earlier resurfaced.
Alas, not even the warm Spanish sun could reignite an old flame.
50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
Charlie grabbed his bag at the carousel.
Scrolling, he found Sonja’s picture. Chestnut eyes, now framed by greying brown locks.
‘Hola Thomas,’ she whispered hesitatingly.
‘Hola,’ he replied. Vague memories of learning Spanish together two decades earlier resurfaced.
Alas, not even the warm Spanish sun could reignite an old flame.
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Writing Prompt Write a story that is a dribble. That's 50 words. Title not included in count. |
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