Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 19, 2024


The sorrows of watching the world change around us

Remnants

by estory

Ribbons in all the colors of the rainbow
Unwind across the sky like text messages
Or tintype;
 
Tickertape falling down on the end of a parade
Slowly making its way off into the distance
With the fading sunset
 
While the ash from the bridges we burned
Settles on the toppled monuments.
Restless audiences
 
Pull the curtains down over the stages.
The traffic is moving in circles.
In the old neighborhood
 
The people we once knew in the old neighborhood
Trudge on and on in their overcoats,
Clutching their shopping bags,
 
Remembering, remembering...



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This is a poem that took shape while watching the rioting across the country and down here in Raleigh a few years back. It made me think of how these sorts of moments, like the Russian Revolution and the French Revolution, among many others, were commandeered by iconoclasts who tore down the world and cast those that came before adrift in the wreckage, wandering with their baggage and memories. Every monument stands on the ruins of one that came before, in many ways, and every new building stands on the ruins of what came before. And the people who lived in those lost worlds were just as valid as those that swept them away. Part of this was inspired by Pasternak's imagery in Doctor Zhivago. estory
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