General Poetry posted October 28, 2024


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I love you

What is Love

by dianatsurkan45

Love is the way I feel
So afraid
I kneel
and fail 
I love you so
but it's not enough 

Still 

I wait and wait 

For my nose

To get close 

To your cologne

That take and takes

My breath 

Away

I pray

I pray to you

It’s peace and grace

I love you so much

I want to make you feel special 

By writing you 

a song

And 

A poem 

So here I am 

Grounded 

Humbled with a little quiet desperation 

To win a contest 

But if

I don’t

I can claim

I love you 

The most 

No matter how high that mountain was to climb

No matter how overwhelming the fights

No matter if I bleed out while dying 

I whine I dine drinking wine

But I love you 

til' the end of time 

And that is all I know 




What is Love? writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem. Free verse is a form of poetry that does not necessarily follow to any specific meter patterns, rhyme, or any other pattern. Free verse, despite its freedom, often still has some elements of form. Most free verse does observe a convention of lines and structure. No rhyming patterns.
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