Horror and Thriller Fiction posted January 19, 2025 Chapters:  ...14 15 -16- 


A war of the few against a syndicate
A chapter in the book Burn It All Down

Ashes and Shadows

by marilyn quillen


The author has placed a warning on this post for violence.



Background
Two men. One war. A fragile truce in a deadly game.

Alex Dane and Grayson were enemies long before the Syndicate appeared on their radar. But when a global conspiracy threatens to destroy everythin
The forest had vanished replaced by a desolate expanse of scorched earth and smoldering remnants. The acrid scent of smoke lingered in the atmosphere, intertwining with the biting chill of the wind. Alex found himself at the brink of this devastation; his boots crunched on fragile, charred debris while he surveyed the aftermath. However, this scene was not just destruction, but a stark reminder of what once thrived. Although the landscape was grim, there was an eerie beauty in the ruins, which drew him closer, compelling him to understand the depth of the loss.

It should have felt like a victory.

But it didn't.

The silence enveloped them, dense and hollow, reminiscent of the stillness that follows a predator's lethal strike, leaving its prey to languish in the abyss. Somewhere beyond the inferno of the forest, a more insidious threat lingered, a shadowy entity that had dispatched drones, creatures and soldiers in pursuit. The destruction of the facility had not been a triumph; rather, it served as a forewarning. Alex turned to Grayson, who stood a mere few feet away, his rifle casually slung over one shoulder while his injured arm was cradled protectively against his chest. His pallid face and sunken eyes told a tale of fatigue, yet his expression remained as sharp and enigmatic as ever.

"Do you still believe this is over?" Alex inquired, his voice barely above a whisper.

Grayson hesitated before responding. He retrieved a small device from his pocket, a GPS tracker, its screen marred by cracks yet still operational. He scrutinized it momentarily, his lips forming a thin line of resolve.

"This wasn't their sole operation," Grayson finally articulated. Although his voice carried a semblance of calm, an underlying tension coiled within it, making Alex's stomach churn.

"Not even close." Alex released a bitter laugh, devoid of humor. "Naturally, it wasn't."

Grayson's gaze shifted, sharp and calculating as he assessed Alex.

"Are you still with me?"

Alex hesitated; he looked at the ruins, at the charred ground beneath his boots and at the horizon shrouded in smoke. He thought about everything he'd witnessed: the experiments, the creatures and the soldiers who'd perished trying to silence them.

This moment felt different, more profound, because it was as if the weight of all those memories pressed heavily upon him. Although he wanted to turn away, something compelled him to stay.

"Do I have a choice?" Alex asked.

Grayson's smirk was subtle (yet authentic).

"Not exactly" There was a certain charm in his response, one that hinted at deeper truths. Although the words seemed dismissive, they carried an undercurrent of sincerity; this might be what made them all the more compelling.

The Signal

They moved swiftly, leaving the charred forest behind as they descended into a valley enveloped in mist. The terrain was rugged; the ground was uneven and every step jolted pain through Alex's weary legs. His rifle grew heavier with each mile and the weight of the device in his pocket served as a constant reminder of what they carried: proof of everything they'd uncovered.

Grayson led the way, his movements steady, despite the injury to his arm. He spoke little, his focus fixated on the tracker in his hand. Alex followed silently, his thoughts racing. Finally after what felt like hours Grayson halted. He crouched near a fallen tree, his eyes locked on the tracker.

"We've got a signal." Alex knelt beside him, his heart racing.

"A signal for what?" Grayson raised the tracker, the faint glow of its screen illuminating his face.

"A relay. It's part of their network: a node used to transmit data between operations. If we can tap into it, we might discover where their other facilities are."

"And then what?" Alex inquired. "We burn those too?"

Grayson's smirk was faint, but it hinted at something darker.

"That's the plan."

Alex's gut twisted uncomfortably. He didn't question Grayson's resolve if anything, it was utterly terrifying how composed he remained in the midst of all this chaos. However, the mere idea of plunging further into this battle, of confronting additional creatures and more soldiers, caused Alex's stomach to churn violently. He knew they had to press on, this prospect filled him with dread.

Still, he nodded. "Let's do it."

The Relay Station

The relay lay concealed deep within the valley, expertly camouflaged against the surrounding landscape. From afar, it appeared to be nothing more than a decrepit utility shed, its metal walls marred by rust and the passage of time. As they drew closer, Alex discerned the faint glow of security cameras perched above the door, their lenses methodically sweeping the area.

Grayson motioned for Alex to halt, crouching low as he meticulously surveyed the station.

"It's automated," he whispered, his voice barely audible. "Probably only monitored remotely. But we don't have much time once we're inside; they'll know we've accessed it."

Alex nodded, tightening his grip on the rifle.

"What's the plan?"

Grayson retrieved a compact tool kit from his pack, his movements swift and precise.

"I disable the cameras, you cover me."

The plan was straightforward, but Alex's nerves were anything but calm. His finger hovered anxiously over the trigger as Grayson advanced toward the station, remaining low and out of the cameras' line of sight. The wind howled through the valley, concealing the sound of their movements, however, it did little to alleviate the knot of tension coiling in Alex's chest.

Grayson arrived at the station and immediately began his work, his hands expertly dismantling the panel beneath one of the cameras. Meanwhile, Alex surveyed the area; his heart raced, pounding against his chest, as he observed the shadows elongate across the valley. The atmosphere felt charged, almost electric, because every moment seemed to hold potential danger. Although he tried to remain calm, unease crept in, creeping like the encroaching dusk.

And then he saw it.

A subtle shimmer of metal rested just beyond the ridge, an ominous sight.

"Grayson," Alex whispered, his voice edged with urgency. "We've got company."

The tension in the air thickened and every heartbeat felt amplified. This moment, fraught with anticipation, pressed heavily upon them. Although they were prepared, the uncertainty loomed larger than life, because danger was never far away.

The Counterattack

Grayson didn't look up. "How many?"

Alex elevated his scope, his pulse racing. Three figures traversed the ridge, their dark silhouettes indistinguishable against the moon's pale luminance. Their movements were precise; and deliberate, Hunters, the air felt thick with tension. Even though the night was calm, a sense of foreboding loomed, because something was about to unfold. This moment, poised in stillness, seemed to stretch infinitely.

"Three," Alex said. "Maybe more."

Grayson's voice was unnervingly calm, too calm, in fact. "Keep them busy."

Alex gritted his teeth, raising his rifle as he zeroed in on the nearest figure. He fired; the crack of the shot reverberated through the valley. The figure crumpled, their weapon clattering to the ground. The others reacted instantly, diving for cover as they retaliated. Bullets whizzed past Alex, splintering the tree behind which he had taken refuge.

He fired again, compelling them to stay low while he shouted over his shoulder, "How much longer?"

"Two minutes," Grayson called back, his voice taut with concentration.

Alex didn't believe they had two minutes to spare. The enemy was advancing, flanking him, their shots growing increasingly precise. He fired blindly, his breath coming in ragged gasps as he fought to hold them off. Then, from behind him, came a low, guttural growl.

Alex turned sharply; his blood ran cold. Emerging from the shadows was a creature, its pale skin glistening in the moonlight, its distorted features contorted into something that was almost human, but horrifyingly wrong.

"Grayson!" Alex shouted, raising his rifle.

Grayson, however, remained silent; his attention was wholly absorbed in the relay. This intense focus overshadowed everything else. Although he heard the murmurs around him, none could penetrate the veil of concentration he had woven. It was as if the world outside ceased to exist if only for a moment because the race demanded his full presence.

The creature lunged.

The Upload

Alex fired; the recoil jolted through his shoulder as the bullet found its mark in the creature's chest. It staggered, however, it didn't falter, its claws slicing through the air as it lunged forward. Alex took aim once more, the shot connecting with its head and causing it to crash to the ground.

He had no time or breath to spare. Shadows danced ominously, revealing more movement another creature, then another. They surged into the valley like a relentless tide of nightmares, their guttural cries reverberating over the din of gunfire.

"Grayson!" Alex shouted again, his voice strained with anxiety.

"Done!" Grayson yelled, slamming the panel shut.

"Move!" Without a moment's hesitation, Alex turned and bolted, firing blindly behind him as the creatures converged.

Grayson was right on his heels, his movements surprisingly swift despite the wound in his arm. Suddenly, the relay erupted behind them, sending a fiery plume and debris skyward.

The shockwave knocked Alex off his feet, the world spinning chaotically as he hit the ground hard. When he finally opened his eyes, the valley lay still. The creatures had vanished, the hunters nowhere in sight. But the damage was irrevocable. Grayson stood over him, extending a hand.

"We got what we came for."

Alex grasped his hand, pulling himself upright.

"What now?"

Grayson's smirk, a subtle yet determined expression was indeed faint, however, it carried a weight of conviction.

"Now we make them pay," he declared, his voice steady and sure.

This moment felt pivotal; it was as if the air crackled with anticipation. Although uncertainty loomed in the background, Grayson was unwavering, for he understood the stakes: the time for action had arrived.




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