General Poetry posted April 15, 2025


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Where the Horizon Held Its Breath

Bermuda Sunset

by BermyBye50

Sunset Poem Contest Winner 

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Sunset in Bermuda

a balm for barefoot souls,

is a soft sip of sugarcane dreams,

the hush of hibiscus

nodding in time to the sea’s

steady whisper.

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Turquoise waters wash

into sunshine blue skies

lapping upon pink beaches.

The horizon hums

a slow-spoken lullaby,

singing in soft syllables,

its lips brushing the shore

like a mother kissing

a sleeping child.

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The sun slips down

strolls along the spine of the sky,

like a secret, sinking

behind cedar silhouettes,

folding light like linen

across the shoulders

of sleepy hills.

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Clouds, cottoned and crimson,

become sails adrift

above orange oceans.

The scent of salt and sap

settled deep in my skin.

Each sunset stitches another story

into the sky’s canvas,

each wave writes words

the reef would remember.

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The sun doesn’t just set—

it sighs, it shimmers,

into the blue basin of home.

Casuarinas lean in,

whispering wind-woven stories

only the hibiscus understand.

Palmetto shadows stretch

long and languid,

like yawning cats across coral paths.

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Each sunset speaks in swirls—

a sermon of color,

preaching peace with every

passing second.

The sky blushes beneath the sun’s gaze,

shy and smitten,

while the horizon holds its breath

beneath the weight of wonder.

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And I—

as a barefoot boy

close my eyes and drift—

remembering watching with quiet eyes,

the world folding itself

like a secret wrapped in saffron,

into silence, into softness,

into something sacred,

a flame flickering

behind the veil of tomorrow.

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The sunset never ended.

It smiled,

balancing time

between sand and stars,

the sea was my sanctuary,

the sky was my scripture

and the sun and the sea

knew my name.



Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a sunset or the memories or thoughts that a sunset brings. The word sun or sunset must be in the poem. All forms of poetry welcomed.

Sunset Poem
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