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Free verse with occasional rhymes
A chapter in the book Storytime
Hope Shines On!
by fairydancer
. the last ray of light began to form, then radiated bright, crescendos of sunbeams dissipating through the cosmos; but oh how beautiful it had once been, the brightest star ever to be seen, was Hope now scarred by old age, its time had come, it suffered much to see the lives that flourished once upon its planets, depart one by one; as the last drop of water shrank slowly, then evaporated upon their now parched surfaces, so many lands of fertile, luscious green, forever departed the starry scene loneliness crawled into every crevice, and like a parasitic disease despair crept in yet even in death, it showed pure grace as its molten core shot through its face, it burned so bright the light travels still through distant spaces, lighting up the darkest places and much to its surprise, a chunk remained, death had refrained from swallowing it whole, the great creator had a different plan; its fragment span and swirled in space until it felt a gaseous embrace, where upon it's momentum fumbled once again upon gravitation, its limbs broke off to form new planets while its soul relit with pure white fusion and so it shines again, the centre of a new solar system, its light filtering through each dark domain that gives our souls the chance anew to live in bodies with sensations, to make our mistakes and face our temptations, to take of our great Creator's gracious gift and make of it what we will, it's precious light, our Hope still |
Feelings writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt Write a poem sharing an emotional feeling about something such as: life, death, war, injustice, marriage,loneliness, loss, hope, laughter, or a subject that might not be listed. Express an emotion such as fear, anxiety, love, hate, disgust, indifference, etc. |
Thanks to jgrace for this beautiful artwork
Just a poem about a star called "Hope" who having given life to one solar system, supernova's. Part of this supernova then forms a new solar system.
The science bit:
"The sun was created from a cloud of gases in space, approximately 4.6 billion years ago. The cloud was comprised mostly of hydrogen with a bit of helium but, also, had many chunks of debris in it. The debris was made of elements and compounds that include Water, Iron, Methane, and many other heavier heavy elements. This causes scientists to believe that at least part of the cloud was the remnants of the supernova of a much older star. A passing star or other massive body perturbed the gaseous mixture into gravitational clumping and rotation. As the cloud became more dense, the intense heat and pressure caused nuclear fusion to begin in the center of the cloud forming the sun and spinning action caused the heavy elements and compounds to spin to the the outer regions of the cloud and began forming the planets."
Taken from: http://www.answerbag.com/q_view/1544005#ixzz0vg1kuRCZ
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and 2 member cents. Just a poem about a star called "Hope" who having given life to one solar system, supernova's. Part of this supernova then forms a new solar system.
The science bit:
"The sun was created from a cloud of gases in space, approximately 4.6 billion years ago. The cloud was comprised mostly of hydrogen with a bit of helium but, also, had many chunks of debris in it. The debris was made of elements and compounds that include Water, Iron, Methane, and many other heavier heavy elements. This causes scientists to believe that at least part of the cloud was the remnants of the supernova of a much older star. A passing star or other massive body perturbed the gaseous mixture into gravitational clumping and rotation. As the cloud became more dense, the intense heat and pressure caused nuclear fusion to begin in the center of the cloud forming the sun and spinning action caused the heavy elements and compounds to spin to the the outer regions of the cloud and began forming the planets."
Taken from: http://www.answerbag.com/q_view/1544005#ixzz0vg1kuRCZ
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