Self Improvement Poetry posted October 11, 2013


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Thoughts on Relationships

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Thoughts on Relationships
 
Fear dominates my life
In a multitude of ways
Can others read my thoughts
or know how I feel toward them?
 
I try to fill my life with kindness
But sometimes it’s only pretend
Those who are loud, self-centered,
Vulgar and rude are just not for me
 
I strive to minimize drama
In my nice and peaceful life
Some seem to thrive on gossip
From which I try to escape
 
Who am I to judge the way others live?
Or for them to judge me?
I prefer to remain in my life of
Writing, serenity and quietude

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I am struggling to deal with someone who fits the criteria in my poem. Sometimes being nice is a struggle.

My favorite writing is the Desiderata. Below is an excerpt.
The entire piece is quite short and it is worth googling it to read.


Desiderata
Go placidly amid the noise and haste, and remember what peace there may be in silence. As far as possible without surrender be on good terms with all persons.
Speak your truth quietly and clearly; and listen to others, even the dull and ignorant; they too have their story.
Avoid loud and aggressive persons, they are vexations to the spirit.
If you compare yourself with others, you may become vain and bitter;
for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.

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