General Poetry posted May 1, 2018


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Humans and angels suffer.

by robina1978

Humans and angels suffer both
The main thing people consider
are human items
like illnesses, invalidity, and nature disasters
Who decides what is the worst?
I reckon this is God, Almighty, in Heaven.
He is the one and only to judge
these all by Himself.

He picks out good people
sinners too. He never makes
a permanent judgement
till just before Heaven's gate.
There He can still forgive sinners.

He is strict and fair
high up in the air
on a chair, wobbling his feet
to hold his balance
to reach a final and just decision.

He makes no difference between
human or His Own angels.
If angels break they need
to be mended as well.
God must know better
than anybody how angels break.



Free-style poem: human suffering writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
The topic for this contest is: Human suffering.


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