General Poetry posted July 20, 2019


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a lonely poem

cold, grey dawn.

by judester

Within her dreams
she comes alive,
laughter, love
surround her.

The dream fades,
with the friends that she made.
The cold, grey dawn breaks,
in colourless shades.











Lonely Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.


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