Silicon Valley
Thanks to Steve Jobs and Bill Gates.5 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting and informative. I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with technology and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
Your poem is interesting and informative. I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with technology and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute to these geniuses! I hope to win.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent naani, Raul. So right you are that those two men changed the world in ways that we are still learning about.
Wishing you much luck with the voters with this fine write. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
Excellent naani, Raul. So right you are that those two men changed the world in ways that we are still learning about.
Wishing you much luck with the voters with this fine write. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I hope to win. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute to these two geniuses.
Comment from amada
One of my sons work in Silicon Valley; I am very proud of him, therefore I feel I should review this post. I like your first line the most, .world of computers and technology...Your words express thankfulness and admiration. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
One of my sons work in Silicon Valley; I am very proud of him, therefore I feel I should review this post. I like your first line the most, .world of computers and technology...Your words express thankfulness and admiration. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An unusual employment of the naani format here but certainly a nod to those two gentlemen. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
and tehcnology, --> and technology,
It's silicon --> It's Silicon
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
An unusual employment of the naani format here but certainly a nod to those two gentlemen. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
and tehcnology, --> and technology,
It's silicon --> It's Silicon
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I have fixed the mistakes. You can check it again. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice images.
-Each one is a giant
in the computer industry.
-You have written a
good poem as a tribute to them.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how your structured
your poem in two parts.
-One about them; and
the other about Silicon Valley!
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
-Very nice images.
-Each one is a giant
in the computer industry.
-You have written a
good poem as a tribute to them.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how your structured
your poem in two parts.
-One about them; and
the other about Silicon Valley!
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I hope to win. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute!