In the End
In the end we return to dust.6 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece struck me when I finished reading it. It is so straight forward and matter of fack. I love the comparison. It shows how everything on this world is truely connected.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This piece struck me when I finished reading it. It is so straight forward and matter of fack. I love the comparison. It shows how everything on this world is truely connected.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your read, the honor of six stars and encouraging review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
That cuts very deep. A great (alas, a sad) message here. Excellent creative imagery and visuals and I loved the presentation and artwork. The Naani form is a good form - this should do extremely well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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That cuts very deep. A great (alas, a sad) message here. Excellent creative imagery and visuals and I loved the presentation and artwork. The Naani form is a good form - this should do extremely well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your read and encouraging six star review.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet.. I gave you your second vote.
Yes our skin dries out and looks all crackled with age
I love the middle verse : severed from the tree of life .. hence slowly we wilt and ultimately when we die in time we turn to dust
A very poetic way to describe ageing , our decline and ending.
Your poem deserves more votes .. I'll keep my fingers crossed
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Ciao mystery poet.. I gave you your second vote.
Yes our skin dries out and looks all crackled with age
I love the middle verse : severed from the tree of life .. hence slowly we wilt and ultimately when we die in time we turn to dust
A very poetic way to describe ageing , our decline and ending.
Your poem deserves more votes .. I'll keep my fingers crossed
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting and vivid in imagination. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Best wishes! And good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Your poem is interesting and vivid in imagination. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Best wishes! And good luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely poem. I can almost hear the crunching of the dry leaves as they are becoming like dust under our feet.
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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This is a lovely poem. I can almost hear the crunching of the dry leaves as they are becoming like dust under our feet.
Patricia
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is a sad reminder that we are here on earth for just a fleeting moment. I call the subject sad, but this poem is written delicately and beautifully, with very strong imagery. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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This poem is a sad reminder that we are here on earth for just a fleeting moment. I call the subject sad, but this poem is written delicately and beautifully, with very strong imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your read and encouraging words. Much appreciated.