Be Yourself
2 Line Poem contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
My dear dragonskulls,
This was a nifty piece of writing. It caught my eye during the read through for the contest and it made me smile!
I can think of a few people in my orbit where your two lines apply big time!
I guess the real issue is.....if they keep talking and no one listens will they eventually stop? The old "if a tree falls in the forest- and no one is there to hear it" adage can apply here.
Well written and humorous piece.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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My dear dragonskulls,
This was a nifty piece of writing. It caught my eye during the read through for the contest and it made me smile!
I can think of a few people in my orbit where your two lines apply big time!
I guess the real issue is.....if they keep talking and no one listens will they eventually stop? The old "if a tree falls in the forest- and no one is there to hear it" adage can apply here.
Well written and humorous piece.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Hahaha. Yeah, the sad part is they rarely ever stop talking. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and great review, Sammielwf. I'm glad you liked the silly piece.
=]
Ron
Comment from Paul Borders
Good job DragonSkulls. I thought this submission used the component of cleverness better than the others in this contest. Although, I have to admit voting for another entry though because it had an aspect which runs in my family.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Good job DragonSkulls. I thought this submission used the component of cleverness better than the others in this contest. Although, I have to admit voting for another entry though because it had an aspect which runs in my family.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Paul. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. It's no biggie on the vote. You win some, you lose some on here. I'm just having fun goofing around. Thanks again, Paul. Have a good one.
Ron
Comment from Wendy G
What can one say in two lines? You said it well - a good piece of advice about life and living, and then a humorous slightly cynical twist. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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What can one say in two lines? You said it well - a good piece of advice about life and living, and then a humorous slightly cynical twist. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Wendy. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Hope you have a great weekend.
Comment from Ann Market
This poem, paired with the picture, truly made me smile! I really enjoyed reading this, and I know I will come back to read it again! Thanks for posting this, and good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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This poem, paired with the picture, truly made me smile! I really enjoyed reading this, and I know I will come back to read it again! Thanks for posting this, and good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Ann. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.