Christmas in our Hearts
The true meaning of Christmas.8 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Raul!
You have 4 votes now.
I chose your poem because ( with the exception of sammielwf,s) your poem was the only one that spoke about the true meaning of Christmas... being there for the less fortunate .. reaching out to those that need help ..
Keep safe !
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
Ciao Raul!
You have 4 votes now.
I chose your poem because ( with the exception of sammielwf,s) your poem was the only one that spoke about the true meaning of Christmas... being there for the less fortunate .. reaching out to those that need help ..
Keep safe !
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate it very much! Happy Holidays! :)
Buon Natale to you and your loved ones too!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Always a great thing to see what we can do for others rather than what they can do for us... :) A good offering for the contest here and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
Always a great thing to see what we can do for others rather than what they can do for us... :) A good offering for the contest here and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I hope that I win.
Comment from nomi338
While there are many among us who lack material things, the ones among us who are the poorest are those who lack a spirit of love and giving. Shame on anyone who is materially wealthy but is unwilling to lift a hand to help those of us in need of material help.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
While there are many among us who lack material things, the ones among us who are the poorest are those who lack a spirit of love and giving. Shame on anyone who is materially wealthy but is unwilling to lift a hand to help those of us in need of material help.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Raul, a nice Christmas 5/7/5 prompt entry. Well written true to form with good enjambment maintained throughout. Well done and good luck - warm regards - Dorothy x
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
Hello Raul, a nice Christmas 5/7/5 prompt entry. Well written true to form with good enjambment maintained throughout. Well done and good luck - warm regards - Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I hope that I win.
Comment from greyson ernst
lol welll i think you messed up but you will not be eliminated but as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
lol welll i think you messed up but you will not be eliminated but as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is just a short poem but with a very powerful message. Here we celebrate Christmas, decorate and pray. However, sometimes in our celebrating, we forget the true meaning of our Christian faith during this time. Especially in these times, remember and give to the poor.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
This is just a short poem but with a very powerful message. Here we celebrate Christmas, decorate and pray. However, sometimes in our celebrating, we forget the true meaning of our Christian faith during this time. Especially in these times, remember and give to the poor.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I hope that I win.
Comment from sammielwf
Raul,
You are so very right on target- Christmas should be in our hearts and minds..
And those of us that are blessed with plenty in this time of scarcity should follow their hearts and give freely.
Thank you for this 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest my friend.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Raul,
You are so very right on target- Christmas should be in our hearts and minds..
And those of us that are blessed with plenty in this time of scarcity should follow their hearts and give freely.
Thank you for this 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest my friend.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you! I hope that I win.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is short, sweet, and to the point. Christmas time is a special season for everyone who believes in it. It is a perfect time to share with the poor.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Your poem is short, sweet, and to the point. Christmas time is a special season for everyone who believes in it. It is a perfect time to share with the poor.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you!