Devastation
An Acrostic- Loop Poem23 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
What a deep and meaningful poem. So well-written, and I love that the last word of each line carries on to be the first word of the next line.
This is great.
All the best.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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What a deep and meaningful poem. So well-written, and I love that the last word of each line carries on to be the first word of the next line.
This is great.
All the best.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments and review****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful way to describe what the heart and/or the spirit goes through after unexpected events/devestations... well done, sir!! ;) These are tough to 'pull off' but you make it look easy! ;) Thanx for sharing that pen today! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Such a wonderful way to describe what the heart and/or the spirit goes through after unexpected events/devestations... well done, sir!! ;) These are tough to 'pull off' but you make it look easy! ;) Thanx for sharing that pen today! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you friend, hope all is well in your neck of the woods, be safe, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Fine work for an acrostic loop--they so often sound forced into the form--rife with powerful and fresh imagery of devastation--apt notes put this piece into context.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Fine work for an acrostic loop--they so often sound forced into the form--rife with powerful and fresh imagery of devastation--apt notes put this piece into context.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging comments and review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
You have impressed me by combining two forms of poetry into one poem. I can't imagine that it's easy, I've tried but not with great results. It's a tribute to your sensitivity that you wrote this to help others cope. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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You have impressed me by combining two forms of poetry into one poem. I can't imagine that it's easy, I've tried but not with great results. It's a tribute to your sensitivity that you wrote this to help others cope. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, yes everybody needs help at sometime, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Susan Newell
I have not been familiar with the acrostic loop format. Very impressive to stay within the boundaries and relay a coherent message at the same time. Keep writing.
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I have not been familiar with the acrostic loop format. Very impressive to stay within the boundaries and relay a coherent message at the same time. Keep writing.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Wow!
This is deep. Your poem is so on point and true
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. I know from experience how that feel. Praise God and friends I moved on,
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Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Wow!
This is deep. Your poem is so on point and true
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. I know from experience how that feel. Praise God and friends I moved on,
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Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you Cookie, as always your encouragement and reviews are most appreciated****kahpot
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Your welcome, have a blessed Sunday
cookie
Comment from Ann Market
I'm speechless. This poem hits home on so many levels. The loop form that you chose definitely translates how deep a crevice tragedy can carve.
Thank you for sharing this!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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I'm speechless. This poem hits home on so many levels. The loop form that you chose definitely translates how deep a crevice tragedy can carve.
Thank you for sharing this!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, I am very glad you enjoyed this form, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Hi my friend. You have been away for quite some time, have you not? It's good to see you back and writing...not just an acrostic, but it is coupled with a "loop" too and a fine job of the entire thing. Bob.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Hi my friend. You have been away for quite some time, have you not? It's good to see you back and writing...not just an acrostic, but it is coupled with a "loop" too and a fine job of the entire thing. Bob.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you friend, I have been awol but I think I will be a bit more regular from now on, and look forward to your work that I have missed, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What a beautiful example you give us writers on how to expertly carry our this challenging type of poetry. There is a real journey we take within your reception of the previous word.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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What a beautiful example you give us writers on how to expertly carry our this challenging type of poetry. There is a real journey we take within your reception of the previous word.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, I am glad that I managed to write it in away that most could understand, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from kmoss
I didn't think I was going to like this style with the end word beginning the next line, however I did find it easy to read. It's a clear representation of devastation.
Thanks for sharing in a form that is rarely seen on FS.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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I didn't think I was going to like this style with the end word beginning the next line, however I did find it easy to read. It's a clear representation of devastation.
Thanks for sharing in a form that is rarely seen on FS.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, I am glad you did enjoy and understand what I was trying to write, much appreciated****kahpot