My Granddaughter, Alexis
Acrostic for Alexis28 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your vividly descriptive, enthusiastic acrostic poem pays a wonderful tribute to your granddaughter, an intelligent youngster, with an inquiring mind, a need to know more.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Your vividly descriptive, enthusiastic acrostic poem pays a wonderful tribute to your granddaughter, an intelligent youngster, with an inquiring mind, a need to know more.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much, Janice. Yes, she is smarter than I ever hoped to be. Jan
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I loved it! What an honor for her to have this poem inspired by her, wow! She's a special young lady, I can tell;-)
Thank you so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I loved it! What an honor for her to have this poem inspired by her, wow! She's a special young lady, I can tell;-)
Thank you so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Melodie. Jan
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Comment from Cindy Warren
Yep, granddaughters are pretty wonderful. I have four of them. We're pretty lucky to have them in our lives, even if all we can do is talk on the phone right now.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Yep, granddaughters are pretty wonderful. I have four of them. We're pretty lucky to have them in our lives, even if all we can do is talk on the phone right now.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I am so fortunate, Cindy, because mine lives next door. Jan
Comment from LisaMay
I can see you are a proud grandmother and a skilled writer with this posting. The reader gets a clear picture of Alexis's interests and it appears there is a lot to be proud of. She's becoming a wonderful modern woman, combining intelligence, personality, and values. Acrostics are hard to make natural-sounding. You've used effective flow-on lines so that it doesn't just read like a list.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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I can see you are a proud grandmother and a skilled writer with this posting. The reader gets a clear picture of Alexis's interests and it appears there is a lot to be proud of. She's becoming a wonderful modern woman, combining intelligence, personality, and values. Acrostics are hard to make natural-sounding. You've used effective flow-on lines so that it doesn't just read like a list.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Lisa May. Jan
Comment from rspoet
Hello Rdfrdmom,
It's the dreamers who hold the keys to the future
and Alexis sound like a key keeper.
The world needs as many dreamer/workers as it can get.
Excellent acrostic poem in a free verse form
with a great presentation.
Perfect art work choice.
Sounds like a super star to me;
six stars to go along with your super-star.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Hello Rdfrdmom,
It's the dreamers who hold the keys to the future
and Alexis sound like a key keeper.
The world needs as many dreamer/workers as it can get.
Excellent acrostic poem in a free verse form
with a great presentation.
Perfect art work choice.
Sounds like a super star to me;
six stars to go along with your super-star.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, Robert. I am hoping to frame this for her room soon. Jan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever acrostic--brilliant choice of Xbox--earns your stars in itself! You convey the essence of this delightful child--how old is Alexis? Impressive achievements and qualities regardlesss!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Clever acrostic--brilliant choice of Xbox--earns your stars in itself! You convey the essence of this delightful child--how old is Alexis? Impressive achievements and qualities regardlesss!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Alexis turned 12 in January. I was concerned about the x word until the xbox came up - lol! Jan
Comment from Anne Johnston
You did a very good job with that acrostic. Your granddaughter sounds like a smart well-rounded girl. I like the name Alexis. I wondered what you were going to use for the "X", but you found the right word.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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You did a very good job with that acrostic. Your granddaughter sounds like a smart well-rounded girl. I like the name Alexis. I wondered what you were going to use for the "X", but you found the right word.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Xs in acrostics are not my favorite, but her nickname is Lexi, so that wouldn't have helped, either. Love, Jab
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You are welcome
Comment from RShipp
Your illustration correlated to your poems message nicely.
I could sense what a unique young lady your granddaughter is becoming.
Fantastic use of her 'loves' and character traits.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Your illustration correlated to your poems message nicely.
I could sense what a unique young lady your granddaughter is becoming.
Fantastic use of her 'loves' and character traits.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much, RShipp. Jan
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. It's beautifully written. It is easy to understand. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your poetry. It's beautifully written. It is easy to understand. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Raul1. Jan
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You're welcome!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This acrostic poem speaks a appreciable tribute from a grandmother to a granddaughter and hopes for finding her a super star as grandmother thinks; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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This acrostic poem speaks a appreciable tribute from a grandmother to a granddaughter and hopes for finding her a super star as grandmother thinks; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you, again, Alcreator Litt Dear. Jan