The sipping sip
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Comment from Boogienights
I love the sing song cadance of your poem and the story ot tells. Drinking might be fun, but when all is said and done, you just might come undone. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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I love the sing song cadance of your poem and the story ot tells. Drinking might be fun, but when all is said and done, you just might come undone. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for this beautiful review.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative. I found
this poem expressing what alcohol can eventually do. I found the words sad with a message. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great and made me smile!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative. I found
this poem expressing what alcohol can eventually do. I found the words sad with a message. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great and made me smile!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer, -- Oops
I just almost called you by name...
Though it probably wouldn't have mattered, I guess, since no one can see these reviews but you, right? Anyway, this was a fun and whimsical piece. The image started it off and I couldn't help but smile - knowing I was going to be in for a treat.
The poem was strange and irregular... but that was fine. I don't think anyone who had been drinking would be able to keep up with meter and scansion perfectly, right?
This was a unique and creative entry for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer, -- Oops
I just almost called you by name...
Though it probably wouldn't have mattered, I guess, since no one can see these reviews but you, right? Anyway, this was a fun and whimsical piece. The image started it off and I couldn't help but smile - knowing I was going to be in for a treat.
The poem was strange and irregular... but that was fine. I don't think anyone who had been drinking would be able to keep up with meter and scansion perfectly, right?
This was a unique and creative entry for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for this stellar review:)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The sipping sip
Hello anonymous
Interesting poem entry for The Drink Poetry writing prompt contest. I'm not sure what it's about. Alcoholic? Day rape? Not sure. I wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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The sipping sip
Hello anonymous
Interesting poem entry for The Drink Poetry writing prompt contest. I'm not sure what it's about. Alcoholic? Day rape? Not sure. I wish you good luck.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank You:)
Comment from Trish Wilson
The title of your poem is brilliant and the poem is even more so. My favorite stanza is:
"I damn the drink
That let me slip
And with that sip
I am on my own"
I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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The title of your poem is brilliant and the poem is even more so. My favorite stanza is:
"I damn the drink
That let me slip
And with that sip
I am on my own"
I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, now reading your lines it makes me smile:) it's quite good
Comment from Wendy G
Sounds like you had more than one sip! Lol. Your poem is humorous - don't they always blame some-one else or something else for the result?
Well written!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Sounds like you had more than one sip! Lol. Your poem is humorous - don't they always blame some-one else or something else for the result?
Well written!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Yup, they do:)
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem meets the requirement of "The drink poetry."
Drinking is no-good for health... As the poem says:
"I lost my pride,
I lost myself,
And lost my mind,
And lost my flair."
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This poem meets the requirement of "The drink poetry."
Drinking is no-good for health... As the poem says:
"I lost my pride,
I lost myself,
And lost my mind,
And lost my flair."
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from kahpot
Alcohol is the downfall (no pun intended) of many a person, and unfortunately has become the target for many a creep, an excellent read and entry, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Alcohol is the downfall (no pun intended) of many a person, and unfortunately has become the target for many a creep, an excellent read and entry, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Drowning in drink here and dealing with the consequences is a lonely pursuit. I think there is a moral in this story somewhere, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Drowning in drink here and dealing with the consequences is a lonely pursuit. I think there is a moral in this story somewhere, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Coming from you, this stellar review, it's a complement.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Interesting poem you have written for this contest. I have come across a few sobriety poems lately. I feel for those who succumb to temptation and fall off the wagon, erasing sometimes years of hard work. There is nothing to do but get back on the horse and ride on. Thank you for sharing this piece and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Interesting poem you have written for this contest. I have come across a few sobriety poems lately. I feel for those who succumb to temptation and fall off the wagon, erasing sometimes years of hard work. There is nothing to do but get back on the horse and ride on. Thank you for sharing this piece and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your down to earth review