Taming the Virus
A club challenge poem17 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a wonderful Cube poem, and just the form to send forth a message of hope that slowly, we are getting around to dispatching this Coronavirus once and for all.
Excellent poem and social commentary. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This is a wonderful Cube poem, and just the form to send forth a message of hope that slowly, we are getting around to dispatching this Coronavirus once and for all.
Excellent poem and social commentary. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you, yes some forms seem to be a bit easier to understand, and hopefully we are getting ahead of this virus, not so bad here Aus. but still the odd case, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Hopefully, you are right, we are on the way to winning this Covid battle. Nicely written Cube poem and particularly the mention of the joining of researchers all around the world to defeat this. Enjoyed this read.
cheers
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hopefully, you are right, we are on the way to winning this Covid battle. Nicely written Cube poem and particularly the mention of the joining of researchers all around the world to defeat this. Enjoyed this read.
cheers
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, and yes we can only hope, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
I don't know if this is another blind entry or not. It's my day off...can you tell? I came to review another poem in your portfolio...suggested by Liz.
Anyhoo...those instructions give me anxiety. Glad you were successful here and I'll take your word for it as far as you following those instructions.
Difficult subject...basically biological warfare. Fine poem, theme and presentation.
Glad you will receive a ribbon from this not great review written from my phone.
Anna
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Poet,
I don't know if this is another blind entry or not. It's my day off...can you tell? I came to review another poem in your portfolio...suggested by Liz.
Anyhoo...those instructions give me anxiety. Glad you were successful here and I'll take your word for it as far as you following those instructions.
Difficult subject...basically biological warfare. Fine poem, theme and presentation.
Glad you will receive a ribbon from this not great review written from my phone.
Anna
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, no this one was for the writers challenge that Jan organizes, no ribbons for this one but with such encouraging comments like your rate much higher than a ribbon, as always very much appreciated, hope you are enjoying your time off****kahpot
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem and you executed the form beautifully with flowing lines in perfect syllable count.
Your theme is current and shows optimism in the face of the pandemic. We ARE getting there!
Great presentation and well written.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem and you executed the form beautifully with flowing lines in perfect syllable count.
Your theme is current and shows optimism in the face of the pandemic. We ARE getting there!
Great presentation and well written.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, yes I believe we are getting on top of this, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Kahpot,
Very nice cube poem. Thank you for the hope of beating this terrible disease.
Neat rhyme.
I like the very effective words you've chosen: quell, thirst, no mercy.
Excellent work, Kahpot.
Best wishes for the contest,
Cindy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Kahpot,
Very nice cube poem. Thank you for the hope of beating this terrible disease.
Neat rhyme.
I like the very effective words you've chosen: quell, thirst, no mercy.
Excellent work, Kahpot.
Best wishes for the contest,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You?re welcome, Kahpot!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The corona pandemic has caused terrible loss of lives and humongous loss of wealth and peace of mind to people across the globe. Fortunately, the great efforts of the noble scientists have brought it under control and it is hoped that it will leave the world in a year's time. Till then we should follow the Covid compliance procedures. I liked your well written, technically perfect poem. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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The corona pandemic has caused terrible loss of lives and humongous loss of wealth and peace of mind to people across the globe. Fortunately, the great efforts of the noble scientists have brought it under control and it is hoped that it will leave the world in a year's time. Till then we should follow the Covid compliance procedures. I liked your well written, technically perfect poem. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your excellent and encouraging comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As you say here, this virus is something we have to learn to live with and in some ways tame, your cube poem is well metered and rhymed and I enjoyed the sentiment, we only have so much control here and precautions are taken, but in the end we have to get on with life. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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As you say here, this virus is something we have to learn to live with and in some ways tame, your cube poem is well metered and rhymed and I enjoyed the sentiment, we only have so much control here and precautions are taken, but in the end we have to get on with life. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Wow! thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and review and for the six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
I haven't created my entry yet for this challenge, but you've succeeeded very well with this cube! Hopefully we can tame the beast so that life can return to some form of normalcy soon. Thank you for sharing - ot inspires me to try now.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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I haven't created my entry yet for this challenge, but you've succeeeded very well with this cube! Hopefully we can tame the beast so that life can return to some form of normalcy soon. Thank you for sharing - ot inspires me to try now.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you, I enjoyed trying this form and look forward to reading yours, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Thank the Lord that finally we are seeing some "winning signs." I like how you showed us how the virus took us all by surprise with:
"it won the start
no whistles blown
it just ran free
no mercy shown"
it's part to play (its)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank the Lord that finally we are seeing some "winning signs." I like how you showed us how the virus took us all by surprise with:
"it won the start
no whistles blown
it just ran free
no mercy shown"
it's part to play (its)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, and yes I believe we are getting on top of this virus, correction made (many thanks) as always much appreciated****kahpot
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Hoping and praying that the flooding will end there and all will be safe!
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Me and mine are all safe, thank you for caring****kahpot
Comment from damommy
You did a great job with this form. I definitely think we're making headway with the virus, and hopefully, life will resume to near pre-virus normality soon.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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You did a great job with this form. I definitely think we're making headway with the virus, and hopefully, life will resume to near pre-virus normality soon.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you, and yes we will continue to fight and beat this virus, very much appreciated****kahpot