My Very Soul
What lay within my soul3 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Dear Writer,
This is a very great entry you have written for The Mirror writing prompt.
It has much depth and your words draw readers right into this soul.
Your ending is impacting and evangelistic. Congratulations on that!
You have a couple of typos:
"emitting such a putrid *order" (odor)
and...
"the *periodical had returned." (prodigal)
I hope you win...this is amazing!
Anna
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Dear Writer,
This is a very great entry you have written for The Mirror writing prompt.
It has much depth and your words draw readers right into this soul.
Your ending is impacting and evangelistic. Congratulations on that!
You have a couple of typos:
"emitting such a putrid *order" (odor)
and...
"the *periodical had returned." (prodigal)
I hope you win...this is amazing!
Anna
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the encouraging words and the correct spelling. Terrible to be a writer who can't spell. Will take care of that NOW
Comment from writer723
I very much enjoyed this mirror story of soul-searching. The honest portrayal of the human condition is easily relatable to most, I'm sure. The ending holds a powerful reminder of love and forgiveness shared with our great Creator. Wonderful job!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I very much enjoyed this mirror story of soul-searching. The honest portrayal of the human condition is easily relatable to most, I'm sure. The ending holds a powerful reminder of love and forgiveness shared with our great Creator. Wonderful job!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the five star plus review. It is much appreciated. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A strongly expressed short story, very well written. Well done! I would like to share the Poulo Coello's words."The eyes are the mirror of the soul and reflect everything that seems to be hidden; and like a mirror, they also reflect the person looking into them."
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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A strongly expressed short story, very well written. Well done! I would like to share the Poulo Coello's words."The eyes are the mirror of the soul and reflect everything that seems to be hidden; and like a mirror, they also reflect the person looking into them."
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the review. The eyes are the mirror to the soul, that was what I hoped to portray in my story.