Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Blossomed Memories"Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
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Comment from T B Botts
This was a very pleasant poem. It kind of sums up life I suppose. Thank goodness for pictures to help us recall the things that our minds sometimes forget. It's nice to keep in mind that each new day will bring new memories, hopefully pleasant ones. Well done.
Tom
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This was a very pleasant poem. It kind of sums up life I suppose. Thank goodness for pictures to help us recall the things that our minds sometimes forget. It's nice to keep in mind that each new day will bring new memories, hopefully pleasant ones. Well done.
Tom
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings to you.
Comment from Pantygynt
The only thing that worries me about this three liner is that apostrophe. I think you mean it as a plural - years. If so the apostrophe is not needed. It does not seem to make sense as it is written.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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The only thing that worries me about this three liner is that apostrophe. I think you mean it as a plural - years. If so the apostrophe is not needed. It does not seem to make sense as it is written.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your Review and Support, I ll Look into your Plural remark and revise accordingly. Blessings to you.
Comment from MysteriesOfAbove
This is a Very delicate and simple seeming poem. It seems personal but also it re lat able for others to apply to their life.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This is a Very delicate and simple seeming poem. It seems personal but also it re lat able for others to apply to their life.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thanks a Shared a 5-7-5 more personal for my Wife and Family, but Appreciate public commentary on the technical aspects as the rating system usually is used.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is great. I think you have, with just three lines, done a wonderful job of sharing both how important memories are as life flies by as it does so easily. Nicely done and well written.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This is great. I think you have, with just three lines, done a wonderful job of sharing both how important memories are as life flies by as it does so easily. Nicely done and well written.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Bless you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. Great job with the rules of it. Your syllable count is right per line. I like how you compared memories to blooms on flowers that seem to fade away but return when new seeds are sown--like when new memories are captured for posterity. I like the play on the word 'spring.'
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed your contest entry. Great job with the rules of it. Your syllable count is right per line. I like how you compared memories to blooms on flowers that seem to fade away but return when new seeds are sown--like when new memories are captured for posterity. I like the play on the word 'spring.'
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your Support, Rating and Review. Bless you.